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You could also send the poem to us for entry to the web site.

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Write a “Hieton”, or two or three or 

 

A Hieton is a short poem in the form of :-

A Title followed by Four Lines of two words per line.

The rhyme scheme is,     a     b     c     b.

The title, of any length, should be described by the four lines of the poem.

Although there is no strict requirement, for best practice the fourth line should summarise the preceding three lines.

 

Here are a few examples :

 

            North Carolina Inspiration                                   Idol

 

            Sunrise hike                                                               Fashioned plate

            Floating rock                                                              Barbie mold

            Natures desk                                                             Twisted fate

            Poetry stock                                                               Billions sold

 

            Take a look at “Idol”.

            The last line “Billions sold”, and in particular the reference to sold

            sums up, for me, the idea that modern cosmetic surgery (Barbie mold),

            the fashioning of an image stamped out by a plate or repetitive pattern,

            produces a twisted or distorted legacy for the future.

            Billions of look alike ‘Idols’ made with money does seem a twisted fate

            to leave to our descendants

 

            Origins                                                                      Day Of Judgement

 

            Creationists believe                                                  My plants

            Darwinians surmise                                                  First up.

            ‘Irreducible Complexity                                             Courtesy of

            Offers compromise                                                   Playful pup.

 

The following has been agreed in principle :-

1          All those wishing to take part in the ‘competition’ are welcome

            The ‘best’ will be displayed prominently in the poetry garden at Biggar

2          The rest will be ‘typed up’, to suit the poetry garden display area.

            Your name and your group, if any, will be added below the fourth line

            if you so wish.  Please indicate by adding this line to your entry.

                        (The display area should accommodate one hundred entries.)

3          The target date is November 08.

4          Entries can be e-mailed to jk009b7659@blueyonder.co.uk

            Further enquiries had be made to Jim at 01698 827581