poem by Yvonne from Blantyre

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My darling, My love
words can't describe
the feelings i have inside
When your not there
my lifes so bare
and the bed so cold
I wish you were their
Feeling your warm touch
and your lips so near.
It keeps me feeling
There's hope still their.
I am so sorry
It took me so long
To realise how i felt.
I know now
Your the one
and that its safe
to love and be loved
And know you will
Be back again tomorrow.
 

Yvonne

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I don't think this is one of your strongest poems Yvonne.  That's a personal view and I suppose that's what poetry is all about.

Perhaps it's how I recite the poem to myself. 

If you were to record how the words should be stressed then that would be good.

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