by Martin

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There was a young man from Carluke,
Whose wife said I wish you could cook,
For Sunday Roast he made beans and toast,
And for dessert he gave you apples to dook!

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Excellent attempt  Martin.

Mind you, I think there are too many words in the last line.  How would it be if you missed the 'you' in that line.  

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